Monday, December 03, 2007

Early start tomorrow...

Well, Ross made it in on time this morning. We're meeting at Eggspectations for breakfast at 6:30 tomorrow, which is the only time he could spare in between various meetings. It's probably going to be one of our frantic conversations, jumping all over the place and trying to say everything in ninety minutes. He'll probably have some things to say about Chapter 3; his only comment after he finished reading it was "I need some time, too much stirred up".

I'm playing with different ideas to make Chapter 2 work (already). One of them is to tell the black swan story as part of the conversation with Gabriel, though I'm wondering if that would be repetitive after using the same device in the Prologue for the meeting in the greenhouse. On the other hand, there's a chance nobody will remember the Prologue after dragging themselves through Chapter 1!

My Lowepro camera bag has shipped from Amazon... not a moment too soon. The little bag is a pain in the butt when I'm on the move.

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